Nevah. This is utterly brilliant. Fantastic. Spectacular. INSANELY GOOD.
You are amazing!
HA! Good luck with that....
My my my Meg...who is punching who NOW?! *cackles evily*
Dang Olaf
Good work. I especially enjoyed the names...
Lorinda...ooooo the plot thickens....
Plot hypothisis #1: LORINDA DON'T TELL HER ANYTHING IT'S A TRAPPPPPP
Plot hypothisis #2: MEG DON'T TELL HER ANYTHING IT'S A TRAPPPPPP
Plot hypothisis #3: Lorindia is totally Olaf in disguise.
Plot hypothisis #4: Lorinda is an old girlfriend/enemy/both of Whitsen and probably will kill him if Meg helps her find him.
Plot hypothisis #5: Lorinda is just some boring librarian who happens to have known poor wittle Whitsen as a child and yada yada yada wants to help Meg but will probably end up dying someway and somehow because every good story needs a sympathetic charecter to die dramatically and for no reason. (CURSE YOU MOFFAT I BLAME MY CYNICISM ON YOU)
In my head I have always pictured Olaf as being the last one standing after the fall of TARP. Don't ask me why, I just have always pictured him watching us all die and then going on to tell our story and legacy to generations after us.
But ya'll have kill't 'em. Shame.
OLAF YOU DO NOT HAVE MY PERMISSION TO KILL OFF TARP.
Just thought I'd throw that out there reguardless of the fact that you never listen to a word I say anyway.
Except that it's Olaf's death we are talking about here. So less angst.
I shall work on it. Never tried those before, so we are on the same page, but I shall endevor to assist you.